Post exchange rates

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diff --git a/views/about.html b/views/about.html
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+++ b/views/about.html
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     <p>
     Transactions between bitcoin addresses are 
     recorded in a public file and <a href="http://blockchain.info/unconfirmed-transactions">published on 
-    the Internet</a>.  This file, or "block chain", keeps track of what amounts are 
+    the Internet</a>.  This file called the block chain keeps track of what amounts are 
     stored at what addresses.
     </p>
     
@@ -123,15 +123,14 @@
     You can <a href="/merchants">spend them locally</a> at one of our participating merchants or check out
     <a href="http://bitcoinmagazine.net/where-to-spend-your-bitcoins/">this article</a> for some other good suggestions.
     The number of <a href="https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Trade">companies accepting bitcoins</a>
-    is growing quickly. We're working to get more stores accepting them in 
+    is growing quickly and we're working to get more stores accepting them in 
     Vancouver.  We believe it'll be in 
     their best interest to avoid the transaction fees 
     charged by the credit card companies. Transaction 
     fees end up getting built into the prices we pay for 
     goods and services across the board so we're 
     indirectly subsidizing the big banks and credit card 
-    companies whether we personally use their services 
-    or not.
+    companies whether or not we personally use their services.
     </p>
 
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