The basics stop pretending it's 2009: servers exist but can't touch your money, Savings restores anywhere, and the Move money button that no longer exists stops being explained

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <[email protected]>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_014tE4U5nEjGTQy8PwYqamfv

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/src/i18n.js b/src/i18n.js
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@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ const STR = {
     howItWorks: 'How it works',
     installApp: 'Install app',
     hiwBasicsTitle: 'The basics',
-    hiwBasics1: 'When you make a wallet, the page generates twelve random words which are the keys to the wallet. Anyone who has them can spend the coins in the wallet. If you lose them, the coins are gone for good. Write them down on paper before you put money in.',
-    hiwBasics2: 'There’s no server and no account. The whole app is one page that runs in your browser. You can save the page and use it offline.',
-    hiwBasics3: 'It follows the standard Bitcoin formats, so the same twelve words will restore your wallet in Sparrow, Electrum, or any other standard wallet even if this site disappears.',
+    hiwBasics1: 'When you make a wallet, the page generates twelve random words — the keys to your coins. Anyone who has them can spend; if you lose them, the coins are gone for good. Write them down on paper before you put money in.',
+    hiwBasics2: 'Your keys never leave your device. coinos runs servers that ferry payments and messages, but they can’t touch your money. The app itself is one page — you can save it and open it offline.',
+    hiwBasics3: 'It uses standard Bitcoin formats: the same twelve words restore your Savings in Sparrow, Electrum, or any other standard wallet, even if this site disappears.',
     hiwLnTitle: 'Spending and Savings',
-    hiwLn1: 'Your money sits in two places. Savings is ordinary Bitcoin on the blockchain — safest for money you’re keeping, but each move costs a mining fee and waits for a confirmation. Spending sends and arrives instantly and free, and is still only yours: it runs on Ark, a newer layer on top of Bitcoin where every coin stays locked to your key, and it speaks Lightning, so you can pay and be paid by any bitcoin app or shop.',
-    hiwLn2: 'Move money either way under your balance — a small fee each direction, free inside Spending. The wallet handles all the upkeep on its own (just open the app now and then), and every coin in Spending carries a pre-signed escape route: even if the coinos server vanished, you could pull your money back on-chain yourself.',
+    hiwLn1: 'Your money can sit in two kinds of wallet. Savings is ordinary Bitcoin on the blockchain — safest for money you’re keeping, but each move costs a mining fee and waits for a confirmation. Spending sends and arrives instantly, free or nearly free, and is still only yours: it runs on Ark, a newer layer on top of Bitcoin where every coin stays locked to your key, and it speaks Lightning, so you can pay and be paid by any bitcoin app or shop.',
+    hiwLn2: 'The wallet handles the upkeep on its own — just open the app now and then. And every coin in Spending carries a pre-signed escape route: even if the coinos server vanished, you could pull your money back on-chain yourself.',
     hiwGiftsTitle: 'Gifts',
-    hiwGifts1: 'You can gift bitcoin with a link: whoever opens it claims the coins into their own wallet — no app, no signup. On-chain gifts lock the coins until claimed and can be cancelled or reclaimed; Ark gifts claim instantly and free, even into a brand-new empty wallet.',
+    hiwGifts1: 'You can gift bitcoin with a link: whoever opens it claims the coins into their own wallet — no app, no signup, works even for someone brand new to bitcoin. Until a gift is claimed, you can cancel it and take the coins back.',
     moveMoney: 'Move money',
     moveToSpending: 'Into Spending',
     moveToSpendingDesc: 'Make money instantly spendable, with no fees to send it.',